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I'll cut you open,
like you did me
but i'll do it different
just watch carefully

you tore me up
from inside out
you took my heart
you took my shout

so here's what ill do
to get back at you [run from the pain]
    [run from it now]

Smile at me,
as i walk through the door
i sliced you open
you're not smiling anymore

slit your throat
just like you did to me
you did it with love
i'll do it physically

so here's what ill do
to get back at you[ run from the pain]
    [run from it now]
©2005-2009 ~insightfrominside
:iconinsightfrominside:

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:icondarktestedsoul:
WOW this is good. I can feel the poem's emotion as I read it.

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Be yourself to everyone around you or you will never know who your true friends are since you don't know if they like you or who you are trying to be.
:icondreamcatalyst:
You write with a good style and passion. You should try experimenting with more formal styles of poetry, i think you would be good at it.

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I never saw a wild thing
sorry for itself.
A small bird will drop frozen dead from a bough
without ever having felt sorry for itself.

- D. H. Lawrence
:iconsy88xo:
emotional death...
:icontrinkster:
omg this was...awesome. Hit me hard. have to fav.

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